Overall score - 10/10 - 180' Rule (2) - Shot-reverse-shot (2) - Match on action (2) - Sequence & continuity (2) - Title (2)
Tips and pointers - sound - I'd really like to see you play around with intensified sound effects for important parts of the story (e.g knife wiping and revealing victim in car boot) - after effect needs to be added - credits for everyone involved - Title needs some work (think about what you are foreshadowing with what you do with the Title reveal/ font/ word movement on screen etc)
I love the lighting, the smooth editing you've managed to achieve and the way you've built tension with your rough edit. Room for making a good thing great!
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Hi Kayla
ReplyDeleteThis is looking fantastic! Well done.
Overall score - 10/10
- 180' Rule (2)
- Shot-reverse-shot (2)
- Match on action (2)
- Sequence & continuity (2)
- Title (2)
Tips and pointers
- sound - I'd really like to see you play around with intensified sound effects for important parts of the story (e.g knife wiping and revealing victim in car boot)
- after effect needs to be added
- credits for everyone involved
- Title needs some work (think about what you are foreshadowing with what you do with the Title reveal/ font/ word movement on screen etc)
I love the lighting, the smooth editing you've managed to achieve and the way you've built tension with your rough edit. Room for making a good thing great!