Well done in nailing so many of the thriller elements!
- the beginning title sequence with the voice-over, news broadcast audio is very effective at setting the scene and telling the story. Well done! - Your Movie Title needed to be more of a feature and really grab our attention. Unfortunately I missed seeing it and had to go back to check if you actually put it in. - You're also missing credits at the end of the film, that's a shame - Your logo looks great - I almost feel as though the voice-over for the scientist isn't even needed and almost detracts from the thriller feel. You can tell she is looking for something without the words. - The curtain moving could have been more of a tension-building moment - That shot up against the curtain looked great, well done - could have even had a mock jump-scare and utilised a sound effect when curtain is initially pulled - Jump-scare was very effective - lighting was consistent and done effectively for the genre - make-up and props all added to verisimilitude - a great demonstration of the relationship between sound and visual elements working together to create tension and suspense
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Hi Kayla
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Well done in nailing so many of the thriller elements!
- the beginning title sequence with the voice-over, news broadcast audio is very effective at setting the scene and telling the story. Well done!
- Your Movie Title needed to be more of a feature and really grab our attention. Unfortunately I missed seeing it and had to go back to check if you actually put it in.
- You're also missing credits at the end of the film, that's a shame
- Your logo looks great
- I almost feel as though the voice-over for the scientist isn't even needed and almost detracts from the thriller feel. You can tell she is looking for something without the words.
- The curtain moving could have been more of a tension-building moment
- That shot up against the curtain looked great, well done
- could have even had a mock jump-scare and utilised a sound effect when curtain is initially pulled
- Jump-scare was very effective
- lighting was consistent and done effectively for the genre
- make-up and props all added to verisimilitude
- a great demonstration of the relationship between sound and visual elements working together to create tension and suspense