- I like that you used a handheld camera and explain the reason for it but you don't answer the question with this slide. Is it challenging or conforming to usual thriller conventions? - same as above for sound. You explain your use of this convention really well but don't say whether it conforms to or challenges conventions. - Narrative structure refers to the way the story is told. Do you show the audience what is happening from the start? Do you conceal some information? Do you have a big 'reveal'? This needs to be clearer that you understand what narrative structure is. The slide has some good information on it, just not correct label. - what about more conventions such as weapons/ iconography/ editing techniques (long or short takes)/ setting/ hostage character/ isolated scene (no other people there) etc...
Overall what you said was good and shows an understanding of what conventions you used but it wasn't as complete as it could have been.
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- I like that you used a handheld camera and explain the reason for it but you don't answer the question with this slide. Is it challenging or conforming to usual thriller conventions?
- same as above for sound. You explain your use of this convention really well but don't say whether it conforms to or challenges conventions.
- Narrative structure refers to the way the story is told. Do you show the audience what is happening from the start? Do you conceal some information? Do you have a big 'reveal'? This needs to be clearer that you understand what narrative structure is. The slide has some good information on it, just not correct label.
- what about more conventions such as weapons/ iconography/ editing techniques (long or short takes)/ setting/ hostage character/ isolated scene (no other people there) etc...
Overall what you said was good and shows an understanding of what conventions you used but it wasn't as complete as it could have been.