- Your credits overlaid on the graphic you did in after effects looks really great! My only suggestion would be to have the credits held slightly longer on screen to read them. - Your continuity editing is really well done and you film opening has a great flow - You have shown a really clear understanding of the relationship between the music / the sound and the on-screen action. You add sound effects in at the right places and it all is done really effectively - I am disappointed that you guys didn't record the phone conversation again and use better sound quality for the phone call. This would have brought more clarity around the storyline - Your chase scene has some great flow and continuity - The fight scene is a good attempt at an action-thriller convention - Although the narrative isn't completely clear to the audience, we get the basic idea of double-crossing agents. For next time, stick with a simple storyline or think of clever ways to fill the audience in on what is happening such as radio broadcasts / narration / internal dialogue etc. - I really like your movie Title - you seem to have a clear understanding of the conventions of a title sequence / opening sequence - I know you had computer problems which caused significant delays in your work. Well done on producing a really great preliminary task.
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Hi Kayla
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- Your credits overlaid on the graphic you did in after effects looks really great! My only suggestion would be to have the credits held slightly longer on screen to read them.
- Your continuity editing is really well done and you film opening has a great flow
- You have shown a really clear understanding of the relationship between the music / the sound and the on-screen action. You add sound effects in at the right places and it all is done really effectively
- I am disappointed that you guys didn't record the phone conversation again and use better sound quality for the phone call. This would have brought more clarity around the storyline
- Your chase scene has some great flow and continuity
- The fight scene is a good attempt at an action-thriller convention
- Although the narrative isn't completely clear to the audience, we get the basic idea of double-crossing agents. For next time, stick with a simple storyline or think of clever ways to fill the audience in on what is happening such as radio broadcasts / narration / internal dialogue etc.
- I really like your movie Title
- you seem to have a clear understanding of the conventions of a title sequence / opening sequence
- I know you had computer problems which caused significant delays in your work. Well done on producing a really great preliminary task.